LITERATURE AND COMPOSITION
Last week literature students wrote Drabble. What, you may ask is
Drabble? I asked them to write a story in 100 words, no more, no less.
Inspired by the economy of prose in 'The Second Coming of Mavala
Shikongo', students tried their hand at vivid language
in a succinct format. Here are a few student samples.
Juliana, Montana
Sparkling white, lights black night. Frigid wind burns her nose,
snow pierces body, scraping. Fingers burn, sizzle. Bones ache, feet
dull, numb. tears turn icy. crisp hard snow encases her, sucking life.
Eyes reflect a house, warm, glowing. Inside people
laugh, champagne-warmed smiles, shiny red cheeks. Cinnamon faintly
tickles her nose, spicy, sweet. Gold, silver balls glitter, dangling on a
tree. Fire dancing, constantly orange, heats everyone. ragged nails
meet crusty snow. Fingers rub raw, white turns red,
body inches forward. Ragged breath freezes. Sounds mush together, vision
fades. gasps fill silent darkness, frozen tears shatter on ground, then
silence.
Molly, Vermont
Age 2
Skipping into the room, plaid dress swaying as she hops from
foot-to-foot. Happily oblivious. She looks up, hundreds of eyes fixed
with sorrow and pity. As she weaves through the legs of mourners towards
the front of the room she smiles brightly, thinking
that it is her new dress that is catching all these eyes. Now at the
front, she sees a box and runs toward it, curious. when she reaches it
and sees her father, she tries to hug him. Pulled away by her mother,
this girl starts to cry. She doesn't realize that
her life has changed forever.History:
From our campsite in Namibia we looked across the river to night
lights of Angola. What is the current political situation? How has
society recovered after the civil war? What type of government do they
have? Who is president? Questions filled minds as
we looked out on yet another new nation. How little we know, they
reflected. How much there is to learn.
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